offline documents

editing An editor will proof-read eclipse tbs documents that are produced for any purpose (for style compliance, spelling, grammar and general quality). Only when the writer of the copy has taken account of the editor's mark-ups will this copy be supplied to a client for approval. If requested, such editing can be carried out on an existing document, but the document should be reviewed by an eclipse tbs writer first. proposals Eclipse tbs experience includes business development (with many successes) in the UK side of the world's largest sonar manufacturer (Anglo-French). Sonar is the (more technologically advanced and currently relevant) underwater equivalent of the above-water, world war winning radar. We're now realistically targeting the marketing needs of small to medium sized companies, with correspondingly smaller budgets.

A technical proposal (tender document) needs to be structured in a specific way, with an Executive Summary and several levels of detail. The words (particularly in the Executive Summary) need to emphasise all the benefits being offered and address why these are better than those being offered by the competition, in a very subtle way. This and the quality of its presentation will win every time (all other things being equal). Eclipse tbs would be delighted to participate in this way in a bid programme to ensure you win that contract.

manuals and handbooks

A significant activity of eclipse tbs since 1997 has been the writing of handbook copy for hi-tech RAF and RN capital systems, designed and manufactured in the UK Defence industry. This required compliance with defence standards and a writing style geared towards the needs of senior officers, scientific staff, Maintainers and Operators. All feedback on the quality of the handbooks was complimentary, in particular regarding their user-friendly design. Possible documents include:

Owners handbooks - containing different levels of descriptive details and instructions manuals with operating and maintenance instructions, maybe for vehicles, machines or appliances, etc. A user manuel (a deliberate spelling mistake!) - a user manual containing all the user (or operator) instructions necessary for a product or service. Maintenance documentation (maintenance handbooks, maintenance books or service manuals) - these can include a service handbook detailing such things as a periodic (routine) service schedule, a troubleshooting manual and a corrective maintenance (repair) handbook for a product.

training

Project Management experience of eclipse tbs people included instruction on projects to customer staff. An eclipse tbs writer, working with your Trainer and other information sources to prepare training aids and other course material, will therefore ensure the success of any training programme.

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